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Submitted: June 23, 2008
File Size: 920 KB
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Resolution: 600×970
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too crowded?

old piece that i was waiting to get the moitvation to color it... finally it hit me... i waned some ppl to try color it themselves... still waiting for those (hint hint)

it was meant for :iconstriffle:'s batman lineup... but it was during my rough time at the big city and i missed the deadline... but now a new jam has risen at :iconjinn366:'s which is a really cool cat from the few massages we exchanged... and also for :iconrcarter:'s jam who's entries were kinda slow and few... (i'll have a skrull and hellboy later...)
**whew! what a nice JAM pimpage!!! go give your respect!**

i tried new stuff here too... most f them would probably be one time only... but i live and i learn...

what do you think?
:iconnorthchavis: gave me some good tips and i felt it was exactly what i needed so i changed it right away

batman (C) DC
created by Bob kane (again thatnks to *northchavis)
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Yes, it is too crowded. I think you went a little overboard with the highlights/glow effect. I've noticed people doing that thing in the background recently, and I have no problem with it, but I think you should make the text more transparent... it's fighting with the image. I would definitely lose the blue halo around him as well, it's not helping. I think in this case less is definitely more.

P.S. Bob Kane created Batman

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thanks and you're right on all the things you said... it itched befor... i think i will change it...

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Happy to help.

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“To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but risk must be taken because the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing.”
Since when does Batman's costume looks like a mummy?

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since i like the ribs thing...

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